1.) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3GHQ4z5tyns
2.) Nobody commented on my post so I asked friends and family what they thought. The feedback I got for the last video was that I spoke too fast. My viewers also said that the way I spoke wasn't the most professional manner of speech I was capable of. Someone said I wasn't dressed up enough and I thought that comment was dumb because I had on a nice shirt and definitely wore business attire.
3.) Based on the feedback I received, my new video has me talking at a slower pace with a more eloquent manner of speaking.
2.) Nobody commented on my post so I asked friends and family what they thought. The feedback I got for the last video was that I spoke too fast. My viewers also said that the way I spoke wasn't the most professional manner of speech I was capable of. Someone said I wasn't dressed up enough and I thought that comment was dumb because I had on a nice shirt and definitely wore business attire.
3.) Based on the feedback I received, my new video has me talking at a slower pace with a more eloquent manner of speaking.
Hey Brandon! Based on this Elevator Pitch and the feedback that you received, I can definitely see that you tried to talk at a slower pace. Also, I can tell that instead of using slang, you improved on your diction and the words you used during the pitch. I would ignore that comment about your attire, you look presentable to me. Great job!
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