1.) https://youtu.be/vhIQUGrR7mQ
2.) The feedback I got on my last post was from a classmate who told me that my second post had some noticeable changes. He said my voice was articulate and it was an overall good presentation.
3.) I didn’t really change much this time around since my second pitch was pretty decent. I just fixed it up a bit more and made it shorter.
2.) The feedback I got on my last post was from a classmate who told me that my second post had some noticeable changes. He said my voice was articulate and it was an overall good presentation.
3.) I didn’t really change much this time around since my second pitch was pretty decent. I just fixed it up a bit more and made it shorter.
Hey Brandon! I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch and learning more about your idea. It is good that you feel more confident regarding the feedback you received from your last post, as this will make your speech improved. I can really see your effort to make the pitch shorter, it made a great difference since the speech is now more to the point. Great post!
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